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   Short Film Critique: 
   Peter's Price

   Director:
Mitchell L. Cohen
   Expected Rating: R due to language
   Distribution: No Exclusive Distribution
   Budget: $8500
   Genre: Neo-Noir Dramady

   Running Time: 20 mins 15 sec

   Release Dates: August 1, 2005



   Review Date:
May 15, 2006
   Reviewed By: Monika DeLeeuw-Taylor
Final Score:
9.4
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Peter Price is a man who has turned his life around. When he was younger he was a thug who was in and out of jail, but no longer. Now he works hard all day at a Savings & Loan business. He comes home to a cramped, messy condo, a busy wife, and an infant child. His life now looks like the poster child of the Ecclesiastical credo, "There is nothing new under the sun."

One evening, while leaving work for the night, Peter is jumped and held at gunpoint in a parking garage. His momentary fear gives way to surprise when he recognizes his would-be mugger as Jake Mahoney, an old pal from Peter's childhood days. At first Jake refuses to believe that the yuppie in the suit is really the formerly tattooed and punked-out "Petey," but after Peter rolls up his sleeves to show Jake that his tattoos are still there, Jake finally recognizes his old friend.

Peter Price has turned his life around
and is gainfully employed at a bank.
...
...But a chance run in with an old
friend reminds him of his past.

Though Peter has turned his life around, things have been rough for Jake, and he is in desperate need of money. Peter offers to buy his old friend a meal. Over dinner, Jake asks Peter about the details of his life, still refusing to believe that the former hoodlum has "settled down" and "sold out." Peter insists that he went straight; going to school and studying business, then working his way up to a position of management within his company. Jake continues to press him, saying that he can't believe that Peter is actually earning an honest living rather than running some sort of scam. Peter admits that things can get tough -- his boss is an idiot, he has to jump through all kinds of hoops at work in the business world, his condo isn't all that nice, there are bills to pay, and his love for his wife has faded. Things aren't always easy, Peter explains, but he finds "ways to make it work."

[Warning: spoilers ahead!]

Peter then hands Jake a wad of cash. Jake looks surprised, because when he initially tried to rob Peter, Peter claimed not "to have any money." Peter tells Jake to spend it wisely, then leaves. Peter returns home. He walks into his cramped condo. His wife is cooking dinner. She turns around to look at him, but the pair exchange little more than an acknowledging nod to each other. Peter goes into the bedroom and takes his shirt off. At first the viewer thinks that it may be to simply look at the tattoos on his arm--to ponder his past life. Instead, we are shocked to find that Peter has large wads of cash strapped around his waist. Jake wasn't all that wrong about his old friend's character--despite the clean-cut image and fancy Italian suit, Peter "Petey" Price hasn't changed one bit.

Content
This is a very interesting story. It's often difficult to write a good story for a short film, yet Mr. Cohen did a very good job at introducing the main characters right away, quickly setting up the plot, and developing the story in a clear and concise manner. It was well edited and put together as well.

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