Content
Livelihood places a very unique twist on the
classic zombie genre. The writing flows from point to
point fairly well with a few minor exceptions, far exceeding
what anyone has any right to expect from a cast paid
mainly in sandwiches and coffee. In particular, the
Zoey and Alexander characters really develop toward
the end of the movie and become downright endearing.
One
small problem is the playing on stereotypes which, while
humorous, may offend some with more rigid sensibilities.
For example, the character of the deaf keyboardist,
who isn't the sharpest hoe in the shed, could be seen
as a slam on folks with hearing disabilities. Still,
it could be argued that he's so unlike an actual deaf
person that he is to be seen as a quirky oddity rather
than a representation of the hearing impaired.
One
of the issues I had with the editing was that there
is no visible segue from past to present or initial
introduction to who people are, which could have easily
been accomplished through opening introductory titles.
As it stands now, when the film begins, we start with
Billy Jump in the late '80's, at which point we're given
introductory titles that explain what year we're in.
However, after Billy Jump electrocutes himself, we go
forward in time to Alexander Keaton's house with no
subtitles to explain where we are and who's house this
is. Due to the way the human brain works, you're absolutely
positive that this must be one of Billy Jump's band
members in the future. Simple titles will keep the audience
from trying to figure how Alexander Keaton is connected
to the Billy Jump Band. Additionally, this'll help them
keep track of the convoluted timeline that starts in
the 80's goes forward to a month ago and then dips back
seven years into the past.
[Note
to the Director: Because you deal with three different
groups, it would actually be fine to have subtitles
that refer to them in group settings when you establish
them, such as: 'Group #1: Billy Jump & Band, 20
years ago', 'Group #2: Alexander Keaton and Girlfriend,
One Month Ago', etc.]