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Final Critique: Waiting on Alphie, Pg. 3

Use of Audio
When I watched the film the first time, I thought their audio person had been able to record amazingly consistent audio throughout the film. When I watched it with my audio guy, he confirmed that there was a lot of ADR in the film, but their audio mixer, Lonnie Park, had done it so beautifully that you wouldn't be aware of it unless you were specifically looking for it and caught nitpicky tells. (I emailed the producer who confirmed my audio guy's analysis.)

The choice of ADR undoubtedly inflated their budget, but it allowed such a polished flow to the dialogue that it was amazingly well worth it! (Lonny Parks had better watch it, or I'm going to have to try and recruit him to write an article on ADR!)

The one downside to the audio was simply the fact that the music was boosted way too loud. When I had the film set up in my surround-sound home theater so that the dialogue was easily discernible, the music would threaten to overwhelm you and made my audio guy begin vibrating. (Watching my sound guy vibrate with his eyes bugging out during the sudden volume changes added an extra comedic element to the film!)

Despite the music's loudness, it was really cool and served as a nice buffer between scenes. Eric Lindstrom, the producer, managed to get 21 different Indie bands for the film and they all sounded pretty cool, tying in with the waiter and the nouveau cuisine restaurant nicely.

Use of Budget
At first I thought $20,000 was a bit pricey for a film that was shot in six and a half days at a single location with a GL2. However, when I realized how much ADR had been done on the film, I was shocked at how inexpensively they had managed to get the film done.

Great character development along
with nice transitional effects...
...and oddball humor help
keep this movie decidedly fresh!

Lasting Appeal
While the current ending is a little off, Waiting on Alphie is a great film that has a lot of lasting appeal. Its humor and commentary on life and crime is fun and quite enjoyable.

If the few changes I recommended before are put in place, this could easily become the Pulp Fiction of the 21st century. In fact, as our magazine pursuse relationships with some of the distributors that we are looking at, this will be one of the films that I will be specifically bringing up.

Overall Comment
Not since Pulp Fiction has an Indie crime film combined so much spontaneous humor with hit man intrigue. Waiting for Alphie is a great movie that takes a wrong turn at the very end. Minimal re-editing and a few extra pickup shots at the end can make this film seriously marketable.

 
Content            
      8.0         
Visual Look            
      8.0         
Use of Audio            
9.0         
Use of Budget            
9.0         
           Lasting Appeal            
           8.0         
Overall Score           
  8.4         

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