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Final Critique: The Coatroom, Pg. 3

Another issue occurred in certain sequences where James was being recorded too far from the mic, as though a single shotgun mic was trying to cross shoot both him and Claire without re-aiming itself at each one in turn. This resulted in a strange echo-y sound to his voice that wasn't up to the fairly crisp quality in other parts of film. Claire stayed clear throughout, however; possibly due to a woman's higher timbre and lack of bass. These issues can be cleared up with a good redub of those segments.

However, some other issues in audio popped up due to current redub issues. Apparently certain shots that couldn't be mic'd properly were redubbed or they tried to make use of an unused take's audio. This was most noticeable in a conversation between Nick and Claire that's held on the inside of the coat room, but shot through the glass doors. The sync varies from a little bit off to noticeably off for the entire conversation. In fact, eventually, there's one section where Nick drinks from a bottle of booze while the dialogue track has him saying, "I hate…" Obviously, that last comment needs to be lopped off entirely, but the other segments are a bit trickier.

One way is to have a professional audio person work with the dialogue tracks until they sync up properly, which can be a time consuming and costly. (Note to the Director: If you go to the links page, though, you'll see that Oakwood Sound Design, which already has extremely modest rates, is giving Microfilmmakers an additional 10% off post-production audio, redubbing, and sync-finessing, so you might want to have him just redub the few issues with James' audio at the same time.)

The other method for getting better sync from off-sync dubbing and second-take audio is by using SynchroArts VocAlign. Basically, Vocalign takes your original audio, which didn't sound good enough and will allow you to sync up a dub track with it. It will stretch and conform your new audio to the original voiceprint without distorting it. While this does sound awesome, it isn't perfect. It can only do a line at a time and it won't work if you're in a situation in which NO audio was recorded the first time. However, with that in mind, it might be a good thing to check out.

If you're interested in this software, it comes in both a basic standalone variety and as a higher grade, more professional plug-in for ProTools LE and ProTools. While these aren't real cheap, they might be a good investment for this film and future films that need dubbing. The standalone version runs $375 and the Professional version for ProTools runs $699. You can download a demo from http://www.synchroarts.com and see if it would work.

Use of Budget
Considering how much was covered in this film and how creative they had to be, they did an amazingly good job budgeting their money. While it could be argued that there are really only two main characters stuck in a coatroom, much of the movie is also told through sequences in the museum, in outside environs, in a car, and in James' home. All that adds up to some pretty good cash-flow management.

Lasting Appeal
Much in the way that Clerks and Garden State have a lasting rewatchability, The Coatroom is very rewatchable and has a lasting appeal. I have now seen it three times and enjoyed it more the last two times than I did the first time. If the few issues I have already addressed are dealt with, this is a film that could be bought and theatrically distributed immediately.

The slightly depressed character
of James...
...and his quirky co-workers could
easily draw a cult following.

Overall Comment
The Coatroom is a whimsical look at the museum going crowd and at the people who work for the museums. Much like Clerks, it looks at an ignored section of society and finds humor through them and their experience. Also like Clerks, it struggles with showing a transitioning character vs. one who will continue to just hang out in his own depression and despair. With enjoyable acting and amazing camerawork, The Coatroom has the makings of a profitable comedy and a cult classic.

 
Content            
     7.0         
Visual Look            
      8.0         
Use of Audio            
7.0         
Use of Budget            
9.0         
           Lasting Appeal            
           9.0         
Overall Score           
  8.0         

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