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Final Critique: Skankobite, Pg. 2

Audio
If there is one cardinal rule in audio, it is this: never, ever use the onboard camera mic! If it is at all possible, beg, borrow, or… okay, don't steal...maybe bribe to get an external mic. The problem with on-camera mics is that they usually don't pick up what you want them to (dialogue) and do pick up what you don't want them to (ambient noise like traffic, an air conditioner, or even the operational sounds of the camera itself). For future films, read our article, 'Audio Tips That Every MIcrofilmmaker Needs', for more detailed suggestions for using shotgun mics and placing them properly.

Another thing that is noticeable is when the sync is off. Like a crooked picture on a wall, it is extremely distracting to the viewer if the audio (especially dialogue) is off. I noticed this mostly with Daddy's lines, and it seemed that the parts that were off had been re-dubbed in post. This may be able to be fixed by simply readjusting the sync in your non-linear editor or by running it through SychroArts Vocalign software. (Of course, if you've tried those two alternatives and still can't get it synched, then you'll need to re-record the ADR lines. We will be doing an issue on ADR in a couple issues.)

The music used for the credits was awesome and very catchy. My only wish was that there had been background music in at least some of the film as well. Background music is extremely powerful in setting the overall mood of a film; it can let your audience know if something is supposed to be serious, amusing, horrific, etc.

When Daddy tries to crack
into a suspicious tin of tobacco...
...all Hell shows up to exact
retribution for his transgression.

Use of Budget
For this being the first film by David Lindabury and Fearsome 4 Productions, I'd say that their budget was right on target for the project they produced. The time and money invested into the special makeup effects was well worth it and paid off well. My only suggestion for the future would be to budget sufficiently for a decent shotgun mic (such as a Sennheiser ME66 or ME67, either of which can be picked up in the $300 range used)); this will greatly improve the overall quality of the project.

Lasting Appeal
While Skankobite deals with an interesting genre concept, I would say that because the present version is very confusing and leaves the viewer with several unanswered questions, I would not recommend it to my friends to watch. However, I would love to see where these guys would go with this concept in a future project.

Conclusion
One of my favorite things about working with indie filmmakers is seeing the ideas they come up with. I never would have thought of putting horror and redneck comedy together. For a debut project, Skankobite shows a lot of promise. My only suggestions are these:

  1. Develop the story more; a lot of things can be explained by creative editing and dialogue.
  2. Use an external, shotgun mic; it will cut down on audio problems (reverb, unwanted background noise, etc.) and will give you clearer dialogue.
 
Content            
      4.5         
Visual Look            
      8.0         
Use of Audio            
4.0         
Use of Budget            
5.0         
           Lasting Appeal            
           5.0         
Overall Score           
  5.3         

A powerhouse in management, Kari Ann Morgan successfully produced a feature length film before coming to work at Microfilmmaker as Assistant Editor. In addition to writing for the magazine, she's been successfully working with various distributors to get microfilmmakers the chance for theatrical distribution.


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