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Final Critique: Pardoned, Pg. 2

The filmmaker used the Redrock Micro's lens adapter on his camera which enabled him to rack focus just like a film camera, and he really made excellent use of this piece of technology. One of my favorite moments was the opening credits sequence -- an out-of focus shot down the sidewalk of what looked to be a strip mall. At first, the viewer can't really see anything because of the soft focus, then someone on a skateboard comes down the sidewalk toward us. He gets off the skateboard, walks closer to the camera, then is suddenly in focus as he stops and looks around. Such a shallow depth of field is something that is rarely seen in movies - but the technique works great for this film. There are several moments where the main character moves in and out of focus, or the camera racks focus between various object, especially in the pet store. In most films, this might come across as showing off, but I don't get that sense at all -- it really fits in well with the visual element of the film. Though there does seem to be a lot more of the rack focusing and moving camera in the pet store than in the main character's home.

Use of Audio
There was very little music in this film -- mostly ambient sound and the dialogue of the narration. This really served to enhance the movie's simplicity, and the music that was used added to some of the more intense moments in the film. The ambient sound was a nice touch as well -- sometimes in narration-only films, there's a tendency to forget all about it, but the filmmakers made a good decision in choosing to keep the background noise.

Use of Budget
Twenty dollars is a pretty small budget - even for a six-minute movie! I think it's safe to assume that the filmmakers didn't include the price of equipment into their estimated cost, since a lens adaptor alone would costs far more than $20. Other than the cost of equipment, it seems as though they got a really good movie out of such a small budget.

The black and white look of this
film works well...
...and prevents some scenes
from growing too intense.

Lasting Appeal
This is a movie that I would definitely watch again, as well as show to several of my friends. Though the general public might not understand the art cinema element to this film, and some may not like the look of it at all, I think there would be plenty of non-artsy people who would be able to at least grasp the concept of the film. It also seems to me that Pardoned would be very well-received at art houses and indy film festivals.

Conclusion
The thing I liked most about Pardoned was that it took an issue that has been discussed by many people, and addressed it in a completely different way. There is something to be said for subtlety and allegory - something that old Hollywood understood, but that is lacking in present-day films.

The technical quality for this movie was very sound, it was visually interesting, and a had a compelling story. Sometimes with short films, it's difficult to get the entire story across in such a short time, but I think these filmmakers did a very good job at getting their message across clearly and succinctly - and they did it in a very interesting way.

I'm really anxious to see what else Star Tribe comes up with!

 
Content            
      8.6         
Visual Look            
      8.7         
Use of Audio            
8.5         
Use of Budget            
9.0         
           Lasting Appeal            
           8.5         
Overall Score           
  8.7         

The author of half a dozen screen plays, two novels, and a proficient camera-woman in her own right, Monika DeLeeuw-Taylor is Microfilmmaker's lead writing analyst and one of our top film reviewers. When she's not writing a critique for Microfilmmaker, she's writing screenplays for Viking Productions.


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