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Critique: Cannonball, Pg. 3

The only small ding that the visual look takes is due to a content issue.  A good portion of the film is set in the woods as they hunt Bigsquatch.  90% of this footage was shot in the fall when dead leaves were under foot and still partially on the trees.  However, right in the middle of this, a scene that was shot in either early winter or early spring was cut in, where the trees had no leaves and there were no leaves on the grass.  This is one thing to consider when dealing with a highly noticeable time of year like fall if you intend to shoot a feature with a large portion in the woods.

They decide to go
on a research trip
...
...To hunt the
Kentucky Bigsquatch.

Use of Audio
The overall audio in this film was quite good, with clear dialogue recorded throughout.  Occasionally, there were some issues that came from the mic being a little too far from the actors, which can be remedied in future productions by pointing the tip of the shotgun mic at the actors mouth and keeping it within 1.5' to 3' from the subject at all times.

The music was a little quirky and twangy, to match the Kentucky setting of the film but, for the most part, worked pretty well.  There were a few places where it didn't marry quite right, but, overall, it helped reinforce the humor and the feel of the film.

The one place where more work could be done would be in the range of sound effects.  By and large, in many of the fight sequences, especially the earlier ones, sound effects were either very soft or non-existent.  Even though pro-wrestling isn't “real” in the conventional sense, the wrestlers understand the importance of sound effects to “selling” a fight.  (These range from surreptitious slaps to their own bodies to cupped hand strikes designed to make loud sounds, as well as over-loud groans of agony.) As such, even in backyard versions, amateurs would have learned similar ways of making impact sounds (or would simply hit a person hard enough to make the same impact sounds for real.)  By and large, all of the fight sequences would have found improved believability with more overt sound effects.  (For these sorts of sound effects, they are often mixed to -6 Db, with Dialogue normally mixed to -12 Db and music beds being mixed to -18 Db.)

Use of Budget
At first, $9500 seems like a decent budget for a film that was shot mostly in people's homes and in the woods near where the filmmakers lived.  However, considering it all went either to food for the actors or actually purchasing the DVX100A and editing computer, the budget is extremely nominal. 

Lasting Appeal
While it has its weak points, Cannonball definitely has a target audience: those who enjoyed slapstick comedies about men growing up in strange circumstances.  (Movies like Without a Paddle, Knocked Up, and most of Adam Sandler's movies.)  As such, I wouldn't mind watching this film again, or showing it some select friends.

Overall Comment
Cannonball is a creative film about men who have to give up their childhood dreams in order to grow up.  In so doing, they discover the strength and resolve that they never knew they could have.  This is a solid  directorial debut from Scott Stafford and I look forward to future films he chooses to make! 

 
Content            
7.0
Visual Look            
9.0
Use of Audio            
8.0
Use of Budget            
9.0
           Lasting Appeal            
7.0
       Overall Score
8.0
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The director of two feature length films and half a dozen short films, Jeremy Hanke founded Microfilmmaker Magazine to help all no-budget filmmakers make better films. His first book on low-budget special effects techniques, GreenScreen Made Easy, (which he co-wrote with Michele Yamazaki) was recently released by MWP to very favorable reviews. When he's not working as Editor-in-Chief at MFM or writing books, he continues to direct and write films through his production company, Viking Productions.

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