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Short Critique: The Final Hour, Pg. 3

Use of Budget
Mr. Townsend originally wrote that his film had cost “$0” to make, because he had done so much of it himself. This is a common thought from many very low budget filmmakers who own their own equipment. However, I explained that budget needs to include consumables like DV tapes and the food your actors consumed during the shoot. Additionally, many filmmakers will estimate the cost of renting owned equipment as a way to more fairly estimate the budget. For all these reasons, the $100 estimate is still on the low end, but more representative than “$0”.

Obviously, this is a very low amount to spend on a film, and I think he did a really good job with the money he spent and with his time. Obviously, I would recommend saving some extra money before shooting for a shotgun mic in the future.

Some of the creative effects in
this movie work quite well...
...like this lightning flash transparency
of a group of demonspawn.

Lasting Appeal
As it stands right now, the audio difficulties are going to decrease this films lasting appeal. For right now, I would put it at a 6, but, if the audio levels were at least mixed to decrease overly loud parts, it would go up to a 7. If the film were redubbed, the lasting appeal would probably go up to a 9.

Overall Comment
While there are obviously some problems in Mr. Williams film, there are a lot of things he did right. Plus, he chose to work on making visual special effects in a short film, rather than a feature length film. That’s always the best time to experiment! With this sort of creativity and drive, along with the knowledge that a shotgun mic is not an optional accessory, I believe Mr. Williams future films will just continue to get better and better. I look forward to seeing what he comes up with in the future!

 
Content            
      8.5         
Visual Look            
      7.0         
Use of Audio            
4.5         
Use of Budget            
9.0         
           Lasting Appeal            
           6.0         
Overall Score           
  7.0         
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JeremyHankePicture The director of two feature length films and half a dozen short films, Jeremy Hanke founded Microfilmmaker Magazine to help all no-budget filmmakers make better films. His first book on low-budget special effects techniques, GreenScreen Made Easy, (which he co-wrote with Michele Yamazaki) was released by MWP to very favorable reviews. He's curently working on the sci-fi film franchise, World of Depleted through Depleted: Day 419 and the feature film, Depleted.

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