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Short Critique: Fizzy Days, Pg. 3

Use of Audio
Perhaps my favorite part of the film was the music. It fit both the time and the theme very well, and was just fun to listen to. It popped up here and there, mostly to fit vignettes, cutaways, or shot montages, leaving some stretches of film with only ambient sound and no music. I think that this was a very good choice, because it kept the film relatively uncluttered. Sometimes it’s difficult to make music choices or to resist the urge to completely cover your film with audio, but often simple really is better.

The sound effects and ambient noise were good, as was the dialogue. I did notice a few moments where it sounded as though the actors were mumbling a bit, but that could possibly be attributed to the character’s accents. In addition, the song on the opening credits seems a bit too loud, requiring me to turn the volume down, and then once the action starts, it was too quiet, and so I had to turn the volume back up again. The same is true of the closing credits, as they are also a bit too loud. This isn’t a major issue, however, and could easily be tweaked in an editing program.

But he soon tires
of his boring job
...
...And resorts to less scrupulous means to get the necessary funds.

Use of Budget
For a 30-minute film, Fizzy Days did not come cheaply - $9,000 is a pretty big price tag for such a short film. The majority of the budget was used in post for PAL transfer, coloring, sound, media transfer, and DVD printing. The only money spent during production was for Kraft services and $1,000 for costume rental. (A little pricey, but for an authentic period piece it’s worth the extra buck or two). Finally, for those who might balk at this high a budget, keep in mind that it’s meant to be used as a springboard for financing for a feature-length film. Considering Fizzy Days’ quality, I’m betting they’ll be able to get financing no problem. That fact alone makes the cost of the short more than worth it.

Perhaps the most impressive aspect of this film is the fact that director Mark Millicent is a first-time filmmaker. A story-boarder by trade, Mark put his talent to good use in creating Fizzy Days. I’ve very impressed at such a well-polished final product, though I can guess that Mr. Millicent made good use of all his time spent around filmmakers to pick up plenty of tips and tricks to aid him in making his first movie. Yet more proof that, when it comes to microfilms, time is money!

Lasting Appeal
Despite the fact that the “quest for transportation” story has been told over and over and over again, Fizzy Days still manages to bring a new perspective on a classic tale. The characters are funny and quirky, the visuals are well done, and the music is quite catchy. It’s a very entertaining film to watch; one that I will definitely be showing to my friends. And I can’t wait to see the feature-length version once it is complete!

Overall Comment
From Marlon Brando’s The Wild One and James Dean’s Rebel Without A Cause, to the modern American Pie series, coming-of-age stories are a dime a dozen. The real challenge for a filmmaker is to keep the story new and unique, and that has certainly been done with Fizzy Days. Children of the 70s will probably love this throwback their generation, and even those of us born after this decade can relate to the classic quest for teenage emancipation.

 
Content            
      8.7         
Visual Look            
      9.1         
Use of Audio            
9.1         
Use of Budget            
9.5         
           Lasting Appeal            
           9.6         
Overall Score           
  9.2         
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The author of half a dozen screen plays, two novels, and a proficient camera-woman in her own right, Monika DeLeeuw-Taylor is Microfilmmaker's lead writing analyst and one of our top film reviewers. When she's not writing a critique for Microfilmmaker, she's writing screenplays for Viking Productions.

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